02.10 Kick It Up a Notch

PLZ DO THE REVISED PARAGRAPH AND THE REFLECTION

IF YOU DONT KNOW HOW TO DO THIS DONT ANSWER THE QUESTION U WILL BE REPORTED IF U DO

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You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made.
View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission.
Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.
Copy this paragraph into a new document.
Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improve your writing.
the original paragraph
the revised paragraph
the reflection on the changes you have made
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original paragraph-
Have you ever seen a vulture before? Well even if you haven’t you have most likely seen an image of the bald creature. These birds feed of dead animal’s carcasses, making them ‘’a necessary and positive part of nature,’’ says M.E White, author of ‘’Vultures make life difficult’’.
These birds have inflicted damage on neighborhoods by, destroying car’s paint, nib
bling the wheels, and chewing the caulking on the windows. Putting a stop to their
detriment to peoples properties is crucial. Putting up deterrents and even contacting the U.S Wildlife Service are options to help stop these vultures from causing
more damage to our homes.


revised paragraph-




reflection-

Answer:

These birds have inflicted damage on neighborhoods by, destroying car’s paint, nibbling the wheels, and chewing the caulking on the windows. Putting a stop to their detriment to peoples properties is crucial. Putting up deterrents and even contacting the U.S Wildlife Service are options to help stop these vultures from causing more damage to our homes.

Explanation:

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Answer:

These birds have inflicted damage on neighborhoods by, destroying car’s paint, nibbling the wheels, and chewing the caulking on the windows. Putting a stop to their detriment to peoples properties is crucial. Putting up deterrents and even contacting the U.S Wildlife Service are options to help stop these vultures from causing more damage to our homes.

Explanation:

Drag the tiles to the correct boxes to complete the pairs. Not all tiles will be used.
In the passage, why does the author choose the words surprise, variety, and contented to describe the Ashley sisters' experience?
Anyone who gets is right is brainliest!

Use the poem "Recuerdo" by Edna St. Vincent Millay to complete the activity.

(1) We were very tired, we were very merry—

We had gone back and forth all night on the ferry.

It was bare and bright, and smelled like a stable—

But we looked into a fire, we leaned across a table,

We lay on a hill-top underneath the moon;

And the whistles kept blowing, and the dawn came soon.

(2) We were very tired, we were very merry—

We had gone back and forth all night on the ferry;

And you ate an apple, and I ate a pear,

From a dozen of each we had bought somewhere;

And the sky went wan, and the wind came cold,

And the sun rose dripping, a bucketful of gold.

(3) We were very tired, we were very merry,

We had gone back and forth all night on the ferry.

We hailed, “Good morrow, mother!” to a shawl-covered head,

And bought a morning paper, which neither of us read;

And she wept, “God bless you!” for the apples and pears,

And we gave her all our money but our subway fares.



In one to two sentences, explain how the repeated lines contribute to the overall meaning of the poem.

Can someone find a figurative language in the Watsons go to Birmingham chapter 9 pls I will make you the brainliest.

Which is important when writing an essay claim? (1 point)
Responses

that the claim is debatable


that the claim is something on which everyone will agree


that the claim states your broad opinion on a topic


that the claim is generally accepted as true

Which answer choice best describes a moment of situational irony in “narrative of the life of Fredrick Douglass”?

A) Douglass is hired out to Mr. Gardner and is badly beaten for no reason after being on the job for several months.

B) The masters decide that Douglass has tried to cause trouble among the other enslaved people, and he is sent back to Captain Auld as a result.

C) Douglass begins earning a wage and delivers it to Master Hugh every night after work, even though he is not obligated to do so.

D) Captain Auld sends Douglass to Baltimore so Douglass will be more profitable, but in doing so places Douglass in a position where escape is more attainable

Is "Dance is the best way to express your feelings" a good title for an argumentative eassy (If not tell me a title you think I should write about)?

please help :((((((
Directions: Read the text "Boats and Beyond." Identify the central idea. Then, identify the text features and text structure elements that support the central idea of the text.

2. If you want to find out if there is something dissolved in a liquid that you could not describe what you could do to separate it from the liquid.​

Charles is reading a text about birdwatching, when he sees the term "barred feathers." He is not sure what barred means in this situation.

Which reference material would be most helpful for finding the definition the book uses?

the book’s glossary

a thesaurus

a dictionary

an online encyclopedia

Read the sentence from "Life in Mexico." "The wind was contrary, but the day began to clear up, and the sun to scatter the watery clouds." What type of figurative language is "The wind was contrary"?

(PLEASE HELP ASAP)

A. personification

B. simile

C. hyperbole

D. idiom

Which passage's narrative point of view is the most captivating? Why? Explain in three to four sentences

Tommy wanted a skateboard badly. Sometimes he would stay after school just to watch the older boys do tricks on the stairs. Tommy thought that it looked like so much fun to grind down rails and kickflip over gaps. He imagined performing jaw-dropping tricks on the various landmarks he passed on his way home. After months of saving money and begging his grandma, Tommy finally got a skateboard. With a beaming grin across his face, Tommy ran out to his driveway and attempted one of the tricks that he had often imagined himself performing. As Tommy put his first foot on his skateboard, the skateboard slid out from under him and Tommy fell on his butt. He broke out into tears. That was the last time that Tommy rode a skateboard.13.
What is the theme of this passage?A.Don’t take risks.B.You aren’t always as talented as you think you are.C.Be careful what you wish for.D.It’s better to be a saver, than a spender.

why is this poem the biggest piece of junk on the planet it makes no sense

The right to make my dreams come true,
I ask, nay, I demand of life,
Nor shall fate's deadly contraband
Impede my steps, nor countermand;
Too long my heart against the ground
Has beat the dusty years around,
And now at length I rise! I wake!
And stride into the morning break!

Which poetic device describes the end rhymes in this stanza from the poem "A narrow Fellow in the Grass"?
The Grass divides as with a Comb,
A spotted Shaft is seen,
And then it closes at your Feet
And opens further on -

what's the protagonist in the story lone dog by Irene Rutherford McCleod?

What are the most important things a student should consider when creating a presentation on something they’ve researched for a class?

What is a summary for the story from It's Complicated: The Social Lives of Networked Teens

Can some one pls help me with this

Why does Colin want to keep his good health a secret? (ONLY ANSWER IF YOU READ THE SECRET GARDEN)

A. He does not want anyone to write to his father.


B. He thinks Dr. Craven will be jealous.


C. He is afraid he will get sick again and die.


D. He is afraid his father will not want to see him.

You are asked to revise the following sentence so it contains no dangling or misplaced modifiers:

We hid behind the bushes waiting for squirrels holding our cameras.

Which choice is the best answer?

There is no revision needed. The original sentence is correct as it is.
Holding our cameras, we hid behind the bushes waiting for squirrels.
Holding our cameras, we waited for squirrels hiding behind the bushes.
We waited for squirrels hiding behind the bushes holding our cameras.

Read the text and write an opinion paragraph on which makes a better pet: a cat or a dog?
The Best Pet

There are many reasons why people own pets. A pet can entertain you, keep you company, and even protect you! Dogs and cats are the most popular pets today. Some people prefer an energetic dog, while others prefer a cuddly kitten. Do you think a cat or dog is better as a pet?

Which statement best summarizes Gregor Mendel's contribution to science?

Wrinkled seeds grow faster than smooth seeds.

Factors for some traits are inherited from parents.

Factors for traits in pea plants cannot be controlled.

Garden pea plants can be grown in a variety of colors

PLEASE SOMEONE DO THIS!!!!! It’s based on a book called “ the giver” and also based on chapter 1-7.

But Flynn preceded Casey, as did also Jimmy Blake,
And the former was a hoodoo, while the latter was a cake; So upon that stricken multitude grim melancholy sat,
For there seemed but little chance of Casey getting to the bat.
How do stanzas 12-13 contribute to the theme of the poem?
who ever answers first will get brainliest

Explain how the connotation of a word in Emily Dickinson's "A Book" adds to the poem's message. Ap-ex

What does Robinson Crusoe do to improve his life on Island?What else would you do?
Please answer as fast as you can.

Read this excerpt from The Call of the Wild.

On the opposite slope of the watershed they came down into a level country where were great stretches of forest and many streams, and through these great stretches they ran steadily, hour after hour, the sun rising higher and the day growing warmer. Buck was wildly glad. He knew he was at last answering the call, running by the side of his wood brother toward the place from where the call surely came. Old memories were coming upon him fast, and he was stirring to them as of old he stirred to the realities of which they were the shadows. He had done this thing before, somewhere in that other and dimly remembered world, and he was doing it again, now, running free in the open, the unpacked earth underfoot, the wide sky overhead.

Which theme is best supported by this passage?

A)One's true nature will always prevail.
B)Buck is very similar to a wolf.
C)Nature is beautiful and powerful.
D)Animals are meant to run outside.

I need help finding a topic for a book. It could be in any genre, and it has to be appropriate for school. It's a short story, but it has to have at least five chapters with 1000 words each. I just need a topic, so if you have any ideas, pls help!! (If you have an idea that I'll actually decide on, I'll give you BRAINLIEST!)

Identify the statement that can be used as a claim to support the author’s position.

Every state legislature should raise the age at which students can decide to drop out of school to 18.

Rhode Island passed a law that states students must be 18 or older to drop out of school.
Requiring students to stay in school when they have already decided to drop out isn’t fair to the other students or teacher.
Congress is discussing the issue of raising the age for students to drop out of school.

Which of the following is an example of denying the consequent? If it is wood, it must be brown. It is not wood, therefore it is not brown. If it is wood, it must be brown. It is not brown, therefore it is not wood. None of the options are correct. If it is wood, it must be brown. It is brown, therefore it is wood.